I wrote this poem with my boyfriend, Zach, in mind. He lives 200 miles away from me, and just like this poem said, when I'm with him, things are different for me. My mother always said that the person you are meant to be with is the one who makes you feel like you're the best "you". That person for me - is Zach. Being with him, I suddenly see who I really am. I feel comfortable, and confident, loving, caring, beautiful, and happy. And really, I just feel like myself - as if I'm really pretending to be someone I'm not, until he's by my side.
This is the sweetest poem ever. I didn't even have to read your comment to know it was about a guy. This is very relatable and has a good emotional appeal :] !
I wrote this poem with my boyfriend, Zach, in mind. He lives 200 miles away from me, and just like this poem said, when I'm with him, things are different for me. My mother always said that the person you are meant to be with is the one who makes you feel like you're the best "you". That person for me - is Zach. Being with him, I suddenly see who I really am. I feel comfortable, and confident, loving, caring, beautiful, and happy. And really, I just feel like myself - as if I'm really pretending to be someone I'm not, until he's by my side.
ReplyDeleteThis is the sweetest poem ever.
ReplyDeleteI didn't even have to read your comment to know it was about a guy. This is very relatable and has a good emotional appeal :] !
Simply beautiful. Very well written, and has a nice amount of emotion to it. Good job Super:)
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